小女子在此真诚寻求帮助.（就此一回）
求助对象：1、好心人
2、语过六级或者专业八级（或者在国外生活多年、英语水平不错的）
3、托福考试通过者
4、两天有时间抽出来帮忙的哥哥姐姐
求助内容：帮忙改正下下面英文论文（小女子挤牙膏挤出来的，很拙劣。在指导老师那里通不过，被打回来三回了
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特此寻求好心的大哥大姐，帮忙改正下，弄好了请发短短信给我。
PS:1、老大和斑竹，您如果觉得我在这发帖不合适，请您高抬贵手，缓两天，12.8之后再删（拜托了！）
2、我现在的级别还不能悬赏，哪位好心的朋友帮助解决了问题，我定奉上500驴币（我也不容易啊
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3、小女子在基地也混了很久了，感谢大家一直一来的关心和爱护
4、希望帖子能顶起来
5、觉得不舒服的请节约下口水（谢谢合作）
下面是论文：
In recent years, China's oil equipment, the number of enterprise products on display overseas, more and more on display with their foreign counterparts, they obviously felt their booth design standards and their foreign counterparts gap between the hope that China University of Industrial Design professional students to study in this regard. I decided to show the design professional from the combination of market research to explore the Chinese petroleum equipment company's products overseas, when it was exhibited in the exhibition design style, design concepts, and explore how to highlight the Chinese elements, designed to showcase the image of Chinese products.ffice
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1. Exhibition design
Exhibition design is an emphasis on space environment and props form of independent design professional, it is a space form of the composition. Shows the environment is divided into interior space and outdoor space. Interior space is a display-based as a starting point, under the action of the form props in the show room shape.
1.1 The concept of exhibition design space
Presentation of the arts and space are inseparable, and even can be said to demonstrate the organization of space and art is the use of art. In terms of showing the conceptual design, showing the nature and characteristics of the design, display design and showcase the scope of the design process, we can find, "space" concept is through consistency. Display design is a creation of man-made environment, spatial planning has become a core element of the art show. Therefore, the design of space to explore the concept of space before the first clearly is necessary, and it is every designer needs to it as "the cornerstone of the concept of" keep in mind.
1.1.1 Space duality
The concept of space has a relative and absolute duality, the space the size, shape, material, and by its envelope should have the function of its own forms of decisions, while the space has also decided to forward the envelope in the form of objects. "Tangible" objects so that the tube "invisible" space be made visible, left the building envelope materials, space became the concept of "space" can not be perceived; "invisible" space to give "tangible" in the envelope material with practical meaning, there is no space exists, then the envelope material would have been impossible value. For the space and its retaining this dialectical relationship between things, the Chinese two thousand years ago, I gave penetrating discussion on: "Gems of that device, when it is no, there are devices used. Chisel households Shuyou that room, when it is no , there is room only. so there's that benefit, non-use of that. "
1.1.2 Temporal space
In the show we are talking about the design of four-dimensional space is, in this sense to the usual three-dimensional space with "time" concept. Time means that movement, set aside time to study the space will be the dull, with no sense. Since Einstein's "Theory of Relativity", putting people's understanding of space has been deepened, know what space and time is a different expression. Space is limited to visible physical elements are not visible under the formation of the virtual body and a feeling that it's generated between visual "field" is derived from the subjective feeling of life. And the time and this feeling is closely linked to the display environment on people viewing the exhibits, is necessarily a dynamic view, time is dynamic interpretation of way. In display space, it is bound to experience the passage of time and space changes, so as to constitute a complete sensory experience. The timing of the display of the design space is a factor in an objective reality, make full use of time, this "fourth dimension" is to create a dynamic space form of the fundamental, but also to create a "movement of the United States" to pass.
1.1.3 Spatial mobility
During the display environment, the space has the mobility is inevitable, which is exhibition space features from the decision. Display space is a space and site planning of the art is in a specific spatial scale with the performance of certain means of conveying information to the audience, it makes the audience like a huge exposure to the art of sculpture in a dynamic way with the display performance, planning on the conscious guidance, so that the audience experience the space-time three-dimensional space generated by fourth-dimensional effect.Show flat planning, can cause a variety of spatial effect. Such as the composition of planar flow geometry straight line, people have a rational, orderly
1.2 Display environment on the handling of function space
The space environment of any nature are formed by a variety of functional space, while the display environment, because of their special nature, the performance by means of space to transmit information to the audience, to promote and deepen corporate and product image of the goal, so it has the the organization of function space includes plans that have higher requirements. Only handle the various functional space such as public space, information space, auxiliary function space, storage space, staff room, reception space, the relationship between, so that harmony and unity of their existence and a public space within, can we really show a good sense of design.
Demonstrate the art of art is very practical, no one show is designed to organize the elements for some purpose and thus to become a whole. Doing a show designed functional partition of space is a priority, but also smooth the process of successful completion of the basic protection of the entire show. Function zoning is the showcase of a variety of functions and linkages between them, spatial analysis, so that space-partitioning to meet the functional needs. Example, independent of the exhibition booth design, it is necessary to conduct functional analysis of space, appropriate configuration, such as negotiating areas, display areas, merchandise or corporate image display area, and so functional areas, while also considering the coordination of the entire exhibition style unity. Another example is displayed in the environment of public space, for public use and activities in the region, in the planning should pay attention to four issues: the need to facilitate access to, adequate and the plot, there should be enough room for people to talk instead of affect other visitors, it should be to provide rest and water space.
The display of contemporary art has developed into a comprehensive reflection of modern scientific and technological achievements, the composition of the factors involved are becoming increasingly complex and integrated into the digital means, one method of optical sound, etc., corresponding, it is a function of space updates and additions. This gives designers the analysis of the spatial plan put forward higher requirements. On the display of the environment itself, with reasonable space designed to showcase the design constitutes jumping rhythm, smooth and rhythmic art of the key results; correctly handle and grasp the function space of the complementary relationship is to construct the ideal environment for the essence of the display.
1.3 Demonstrate some of the basic principles of space design
1.3.1 With dynamic serialization, there are rhythmic form of the space show
Exhibition space mentioned earlier, the biggest feature is a very strong liquidity, so in space designed to take advantage dynamic serialization, there are rhythmic display of the form must first follow the basic principle, which is by the exhibition space of the nature and human factors. People visited the display space in the state of the movement is in motion and get the ultimate space experience feelings. This requires display space must be as a basis for the most reasonable way to streamline arrangements for the audience to visit, so that the audience in the flow and complete, the economy involved in demonstration activities, as much as possible without taking away or less repeated the line, in particular, is not displayed in key areas, repeated treatment in the space to do just like music melody like a smooth, distinct cadence have caused. A matter of course the whole design. To meet the function while people feel the charm and design of spatial variation of the infinite fun.
1.3.2 In space designed to take into account the human factor, so that space to better serve the people
The basic structure of exhibition space from the workplace structure, and the path structure, and the field structure of the composition, structure, properties of which place is to demonstrate the basic properties of space. Because place and space to reflect the most basic of human relationships. It is shown that the human subject. Through the center (ie premises), direction (ie the path), regional (ie fields) synergistic relationship between the "force" that "highlights the social and psychological state of the human position." Is a human given the fourth-dimensional display space, making it the state from the unreal display of the environment through human action reveals it, while people in the course of this experience of space, access to all of the psychological feelings. "Man" is the exhibition space the ultimate service, thus putting people at the spiritual level as animals on the high-level requirements is to demonstrate one aspect of the design that must be met.
Exhibition Design need to meet people in the dual physical and spiritual needs, this is exhibition space during the fundamental basis for the analysis. Display of human needs comfortable and harmonious environment, sensual taste for demonstration effect, information-rich display the contents of safe and convenient space for planning, thoughtful services and facilities, etc., these are human beings in the spirit of the display design requests. This requires designers to carefully analyze the activities of visitors behavior and conducted in the juice with a scientific attitude of the ergonomics give full attention, so that display space of the shape, size and human-scale cooperation between the appropriate, so that the proportion of the various parts of space, scale and people's perception in space operations and appropriate ways to co-ordinate, coordinate, which is the most basic space requirements. Same time, people should be in a comfortable environment for the activities, if not create a psychological closeness to give people a warm feeling of space, even using the most advanced means of display environment is cold mechanical composition of the empty shell with no life . An exhibition space filled with user-friendly is a "sensible", "reasonable" design.
1.3.3 The most effective space to display exhibits
Exhibits is the protagonist of exhibition space in the most effective venue for location of the exhibits presented to the audience is the primary purpose of dividing the space. Display order logic design, layout display scheme, the rational allocation is to use exhibition space for the prerequisite to achieve the best display results. Thus, designers must be space and display the contents be considered together, the different display contents corresponding to display the form and space division. Such as the display of a commercial nature activities require more open space, space and space for interaction between the penetration, the location of exhibits to be visible, for those who demonstrate the visual focal point, such as sound, light, electricity, dynamics and simulation, and display the form, it is necessary give full and prominent display space in order to enhance the visual impact on people, give the audience left a deep impression. In short, to exhibit a reasonable position is to demonstrate the spatial planning top priority issue, but also made a successful show can design the key.
Show activities require the message to be displayed in the public eye through space and space activities for our perception of the place, no space, we will be unable to access to information and people can not share. In short, properly handle the issue of space is to demonstrate the essence of the design; a correct understanding of the relationship between space and the display design is to do a design premise and foundation; better use of "space" language can be designed to give a real meaning and vitality of the design.
