楼主的签名翻译不够准确啊：人人都享有上帝赋予的某些不可以转让的权利，这一句“转让”翻译成“剥夺”似乎更好啊。原文是这样的吧：We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness.
我们认为下面这些真理是不言而喻的：（人人生而平等）造物者创造了平等的个人，并赋予他们若干不可剥夺的权利，其中包括生命权、自由权和追求幸福的权利。
